=), I have a little conserved about this poem, yes it is comparing, but still lack of something. I hope I have a good inspiration in future!
I feel that I am getting harder to write, and you know, I still do not have too much experience in life! Beautiful and simple things, often comes from deep understanding and feeling, and this, I have my fear too. If I can choose, I choose a happy life, and less simple words. But, there is no escape I guess.
It just seems too simple to figure out about the writing, and after I have written, I google it to see if there is any other similar thoughts. Thank God, not found yet. I did that often, I just feel everyone can have the same thoughts as me =)!