《偷心》A Stolen Heart

Your Smile,
taste like the Honey,
intoxicating like the Wine,
warm like the Morning Sunshine,
O, where is my Heart?
He leans to your Smile.

妳的微笑,
像蜜糖那样甜,
像红酒那样醉人,
像晨光那样温暖,
啊,我的心呢?
他和妳的微笑靠在了一起。

祈泉
2012年10月6日于新加坡

9 Responses

  1. I am overwhelmed to read this – just as amazing as you, yourself!! A beautiful thought written artistically!
    -Naima.

    • I have correct some of the grammars, and to change a little bit the last phrase. You can always correct me, because I am usually a bit careless in grammar🙂. You can also be my teacher.

      I like my writing to make me smile at the last phrase, but I like every word of your comment, even if it is a criticism.

      Thanks.
      KC

      • I just saw your correction – the little flaws can be ignored right now given what condition you are in at the present moment! After all, grammar and vocabulary are the worldly laws – the feeling what the words bring to you at the end of the day! This one affected me enough to ask you if I can share it on my Facebook? =)
        With much love,❤
        -Naima.

      • Aha, good to hear some good comments from you🙂.

        kc

      • You are always welcome =)
        -Naima.

  2. You write beautifully. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog

    • I have given you a star, and you have given me the sky of stars =). I will come by to read your post from facebook and directly at the wordpress.

      Looking forward for your open heart writing as well!

      kc

  3. just fabulous🙂

    • Your words are always short and sweet =)!

      kc

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