《流淌的河 》The River Flow

那缓缓流淌的河,
流向了没有时间的天际,
在那金黄色的夕阳的光里,
微风带着熟悉的香味拖曳着妳半透明的丝绸的长裙,
而在那水面闪闪的光辉下,
看不到的是妳的脸孔,
当我要再喊妳的名字的时候,
你只留下了一抹暗红在远山处,
我对妳说的再见,
沉没在了没有回音的流水中。

The river flows,
to the timeless horizon,
in the golden sunset light,
your silky gown appears translucent in the drag of breeze with the familiar fragrance,
and that flickering light from the reflecting water,
hides your face from my earnest stare,
when I am about to call your name again,
you have already left your final glow in the farthest mountain,
and my goodbye to you,
is drowned in the silence of the river flow.

祈泉
2013年1月22日于新加坡

18 Responses

  1. Beautiful … as always -:)!

    • Thank you Daniela, wish that lie ahead of us a refresh and a wonderful journey in this new year, and I should keep contributing my writing to you and many others excellent friends/readers of the world =).

      kc

  2. Beautiful.

    • Thank you Chris, your words always give me the strength to continue my writing. It is wonderful to have many good friends cum mentors through the writing.

      It was an extraordinary journey for me, ever since I have started writing here.

      kc

  3. So gentle and sweet.

    • I am glad you enjoy reading it🙂. A little happiness in you is a bless for me.

      KC

  4. I am glad you are writing again. I know you must be happy about it too.

    I do not write deep and beautiful pieces, but I have a nice feeling when I write and post something. There is a feeling of completion.

    Having a few people leave a sincere comment is better than a hundred likes.

    • You are right about the sincere comments count more than the number of likes =). Often I think the bloggers here are very friendly and polite. Sometimes I think my comments to others are too honest.

      I do feel happy about finishing this poem, but always I do have fear too if is the best I can possibly write. I keep convincing myself, I can write a better one.

      I do not write deep meaning poem too, I can’t tolerate if even myself could not understand it well. I just want to write about my feeling of love. =)

      kc

  5. a masterpiece! a beautiful, gorgeous goodbye! one can fall in love with it!

    • Thank you Sharmishtha, like mixedupmeme said, a few sincere comments are more important than the likes =). Each of your word is the energy to my courage in writing a better one.

      kc

  6. It is a beautiful poem. It has mystery and a lyrical tone that entrances.

    • Our memory flows like a river, someone passing by our sides, and gone. When the memory faded, slowly we can’t recall the details of their faces, of the time for being together. Hopefully the goodbye flows with the river, with our message of love.

      Glad that you enjoy reading it.
      kc

  7. Thank you for stopping by.

    • Thank for finding the joke for us.
      kc

  8. Reading poetry is so relaxing. Thanks.

    • Every time you come to visit my blog, It is just like a tornado, shaking all my posts with your liked, and then left, leaving me no time to think what was happening for a few seconds🙂.Thank you Russel.

      kc

      • I could spend all day, each and every day, reading poetry like yours. Alas, my creditors would not be very happy with me unless you care to donate in great amounts to my bank account…………….lol

      • If words can turn into the the bank note of spirituality, I wish I could donate you my words =).

        kc

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