《觉醒》Awakening

《觉醒》Awakening

静默
是那些生命
最黑暗的夜里
的脚步声
震醒了
灵魂

她睁开了双眼
寻找着灯塔

Silence
those footsteps
of darkest nights
of life
have shaken
the soul

She opens her eyes
to search for the beacon

祈泉
2012年9月12日于新加坡
Revised on 2016年7月28日

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14 Responses

  1. I loved the concept how silence is compared to the darkest night!!
    -Naima.

    globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 9:25 am
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    • Dear Naima, the Silence is compared to the sound of the footstep, and the darkest night is to intensify the sound of footstep, like the sound of the bell in a temple, hits our heart, one, two, three, and so on.

      The question is, how can the Silence be translated into the sound of the bell, and to call our soul to wake up, isn’t here a paradox? :).

      KC

      qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 9:29 am
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      • Yeah, this is intense! I like it!
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 4:23 pm

      • Your words are the pollen, it grow itself into the flower in my heart.

        kc

        qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 8:18 pm

      • Awwww.. that is such a poetic compliment and comment 🙂
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 8:24 pm

      • Because you are my dear friend.
        kc

        qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 8:25 pm

      • So are you 🙂
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 8:39 pm

      • OK for your words, I will write another poetic reply next time =). Can’t think of too many at a time.

        kc

        qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 8:43 pm

      • No problem 🙂
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 8:45 pm

    • I mean the bell, that knock at the door of our heart, and to wake our soul up.

      qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 9:35 am
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      • I understand this part well 🙂
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 4:31 pm

      • I am sorry =). Today does not seems to be my day, too much work in my mind, I don’t have a calm heart and a clear mind.

        kc

        qiquan - 2012/09/12 at 8:10 pm

      • You still explained me clearly 🙂
        -Naima.

        globalunison - 2012/09/12 at 8:26 pm

  2. Reblogged this on River of the heart.

    qiquan - 2016/07/28 at 11:18 pm
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